Still My Sister WiP

Just something I never got around to finishing... it was mainly a means of experimental coloring and shading.
These two are very old characters of mine. Made them probably when I was 13. They are fraternal twins.
Their names are Evelyn and Ren.

The summary behind this..
Ren and Evy had been locked up in a complex run by defective but very crafty irkens, who had gathered and formed a cult dedicated to biological experimentation and such. One of their projects involved finding a substitute for a PAK, and in short Evy and Ren were put into said project.
Ren happened friends with one of these cult members.. or, at least, he thought he was friends with him. The man whom he befriended was named Kleist - he was considered a major of the group. Ren, understanding the cult's motives, chose to assist the cult in whatever way he could. This included stealing unborn smeets, acquiring money through illegal means, even obtaining drugs through his sister's job and whatever.

One night, Ren awoke to find himself in a tight space, swallowed in pitch black darkness. Ren attempted to use his PAK to illuminate the area, but did not make any progress save for the sound of a flying spark. Something was definitely awry. He reached behind himself and touched his spine, running his fingers along a hole with the metal fringe, where once he had a connection to an entirely artificial life source. And now that source was gone. Almost immediately, he began to panic. How could he have kept alive this long and still be fully aware? Or was it just a dream? No.. this moment.. didn't have that 'dream' feel.

As just about anyone would, he stood up and screamed for help. It was probably an hour before, finally, light. He scanned around the small area in which he was curled up, seeing nothing but the inside of a metallic tube with a tiny white light on the ceiling. Shortly, a section of the tube's walls pulled back. Ren looked out, seeing a dimly illuminated hallway, and in front of him, two people. He did not recognize either for a while, then he noticed the eyes on one; they reminded him of Kleist. When the person with the familiar eyes spoke, he realized it; this person was Kleist. In a very quick series of thoughts and realizations, Ren came to the conclusion that he was not in here by mistake, and that his so called "friend" must've had something to do with all this.

Ren asked where his PAK had gone, why he was there, and who this stranger was. Kleist stopped him shortly; "Ren, relax. We have given you a substitute for your PAK. They are synthetic but entirely functional structures, and they are key to your survival. You can't see them though - they are inside your body. It took about five days or so, but consider yourself lucky; the process could've taken two weeks if it hadn't been for your previous assistance to our organization... Also, this man is my assistant, his name is Vanner."

Ren had already begun to panic before his friend was finished explaining.

"Please, Ren... I thought you would want this..."

Ren just shouted at him. Shouted and cursed.
"I'd have given you my fucking consent! Does Evelyn know about this?"

Kleist stared for a moment, then shook his head. "She wouldn't. You see, we've given her a substitute as well, and it's still a work in progress. The method is quite different-"

"What happened to her?"

"We can assure you, she's safe. Very safe."

"I need to see her."

"Ren, you need to recover."
Kleist walked over to the panel near Ren's tube-like cell.

"Please, Kleist-"

Before he could utter any more, the metal tube closed in on him. His rage quickly filled to the brim, to the point where he could not seem to hold himself back. He actually began to scream and smash his arms against the glass, though to no avail. It suddenly felt as though an uncontrolled energy was surging from within him, and tediously forcing its way out. Before he had any idea of what was going on, the steel began to bend outward and split - the invisible field could be felt wavering until it had dissolved. Ren looked to a hole in the metal that was nearly large enough for him to escape through. Almost immediately, it grew big enough for him to pass, and he did so. Without checking where Kleist and the other guy was, he ran at a breakneck speed down the hallway.

After a lot of tedious running, scanning rooms, and shoving people aside, Ren finally came upon a lab area. It was a long hall divided into many sub-rooms; in the subrooms he saw the bodies of smeets and adult irkens alike - he didn't take the time to check whether or not they were alive, only if they looked anything like Evy. Despite having no hope of finding her, he saw a feminine figure face-down on a wide table. He strided over and carefully lifted the head of the person; and there she was, completely unconcious. But she felt warm. Ren took notice of the hole in her back which had also been used to connect to a PAK, now oozing with an unrecognized, dark brown fluid. He took care in lifting Evy from the table, and placed her over his shoulder.

...

long story short after that they get to some hiding place and Evy wakes up and Ren is all b'aww. And Evy's intelligence begins degrading and he notices it, and she also starts becoming more violent and loud as opposed to her calm and sweet demeanor. There are also parasites in her back, he finds, but cutting them off would mean killing her. While that may be a better solution, he would feel awful about it.

What the fuck Kenz, that wasn't a summary.
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